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Post by Roro on Sat Feb 08, 2014 3:20 am

Hey guys!
So I covered this song earlier today!

I... admit I'm not good at this quiet stuff, but hope you guys enjoy my cover of You've Got A Friend.

Leave comments, critiques, and all that jazz! biggrin.gif

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Post by Garnet on Sat Feb 08, 2014 4:52 pm

Hey Roro,

I had a few problems with this
1) Intonation - you fell flat a lot
2) Dynamics - there weren't really many and your phrasing and expression didn't vary all that much through the song.

It was a good first attempt, but I'd like to hear you try to incorporate more softness and air into your tone and work on that pitch a little! I think it can be great, but right now it just needs a bit or improvement!


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Post by Roro on Sun Feb 09, 2014 1:10 pm

Thanks for the notes Garnet!

I will probably redo this song in the future lol so I shall keep all that in mind.

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