Always With Me (Monologue reading)

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Always With Me (Monologue reading)

Post by RickBK on Wed Aug 06, 2014 6:32 pm

Wrote this one a couple of months ago and uploaded the text on VH then I decided to record it using my phone (since, my mic's adopter's broken)

but yeah...the phone recorder worked well for this theme and the background noise is there on purpose... Smile

Anyway, I'm still working on my accent and diction to some of the words...cuz english is definitely not my first language. But I think i did pretty well. whatchathink?

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Re: Always With Me (Monologue reading)

Post by Nayami on Thu Aug 07, 2014 2:40 pm

I really like this! I think you have a great flair for writing, and your delivery (as far as I can tell, I'm no actor xD; ) was pretty good. Your accent would slip in, but I didn't think it detracted from the monologue at all.

Great job~!

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Post by RickBK on Thu Aug 07, 2014 3:10 pm

Nayami wrote:I really like this! I think you have a great flair for writing, and your delivery (as far as I can tell, I'm no actor xD; ) was pretty good. Your accent would slip in, but I didn't think it detracted from the monologue at all.  

Great job~!

thank you very much. Very Happy I really love writing. Yeah, I'm still working on my accent but hopefully, I'll master it soon. Here's hoping.
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Re: Always With Me (Monologue reading)

Post by ValkyrieCeles on Fri Aug 08, 2014 7:46 pm

This was really good. Very chilling and the writing was superb. My only note really is: I would have left the music out and just kept it silent the entire way through: Like the first half was really chilling and eery, then the music came in and it took me out of it/distracted me the entire rest of the monologue. But other than that, great acting and I really liked this!
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Re: Always With Me (Monologue reading)

Post by RickBK on Sat Aug 09, 2014 11:25 am

ValkyrieCeles wrote:This was really good.  Very chilling and the writing was superb.  My only note really is:  I would have left the music out and just kept it silent the entire way through:  Like the first half was really chilling and eery, then the music came in and it took me out of it/distracted me the entire rest of the monologue.  But other than that, great acting and I really liked this!

thank you very much Very Happy . I was thinking of doing that but for some reason, I ended up putting some BG music in it, IDK why Sad .
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