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Some covers I did this week

Post by Javastorm on Fri Aug 15, 2014 11:03 pm

Going to post a few covers here after I send them to Nayami! Any and all feedback/criticism welcome.

I See the Light (Swedish Version)
Da Te Volim (Serbian love song)
As Time Goes By (Korean song)
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Re: Some covers I did this week

Post by Nayami on Fri Aug 15, 2014 11:41 pm

Really like your tone, gorgeous. And I love how you sing in so many different languages!

Technique-wise, I'd say watch some of your higher notes, you do have a tendency to fall just off the note at times. I heard a couple of vocal cracks, which some breath-support exercises should help with.

Really love your stuff, though. Definitely interested in hearing more!

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Re: Some covers I did this week

Post by RickBK on Sat Aug 16, 2014 5:14 am

I really like your tone...it's very masculine yet soft...and you got a gorgeous vibrato. There were a couple of vocal cracks here and there but whenever you reach some notes perfectly, it sounds awesome Very Happy

I got this feeling that you'll sound amazing with any josh groban songs! Very Happy
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Re: Some covers I did this week

Post by Garnet on Sat Aug 16, 2014 10:47 am

This is a critique on I see the light!

Watch the noise on your mic! There was some hiss on your vocals from either your mic or background noise. EQ modification would definitely help this, let me know if you want advice on that.

I adore the soul in your voice, I think it's so wonderful. I'm not a huge fan of self-duets as a general rule, but I liked how you tackled this. Some cracking on the high notes, and they sounded a bit throaty so watch your vocal placement. They aren't quite falsetto, but not chest, which not only doesn't sound as nice as possible, but can put some strain on your throat. There were some other support issues towards the end of the song on the higher notes, so I'd say work on this. 

The harmonies were generally good but there were some timing issues that affected the blend in places, otherwise really pleasant and nice though.

I loved your performance on this a lot. Your voice brought a lot of emotion to it - it seems to naturally carry that, which is fantastic. Apart from some technique and timing issues, though, this was spot on and really enjoyable to listen to. 

Great job!
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Re: Some covers I did this week

Post by Javastorm on Sat Aug 16, 2014 1:34 pm

Thanks everyone for the constructive feedback! I'm learning a lot already, which is fantastic Very Happy
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Re: Some covers I did this week

Post by ValkyrieCeles on Sun Aug 17, 2014 12:54 am

I don't have much to add - but just wanted to say I listened to all of these and loved them XD agree with everything everyone else has said, so I just get to melt to your voice yay!
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