(original Song) Love's Not Love Like Before

this is a song I wrote from last year. As far as I can remember, I posted an (more) amateur recording of this in VH where it was only recorded using a cellphone recorder. that was in guitar and live tho.

I finally made a backtrack for this one and now in piano.

So when i was writing this, I'm imagining it to be sung by a girl (of course in a higher key) because, for some reason, it fits more with a girl singer than a guy.

I was also about to use this for GREEK's finale, but I couldn't sing it properly...that's why i won't be using it anymore.

Here's my version:
https://soundcloud.com/riko-halog/loves-not...e-original-song

Instrumental (if anyone's interested lol...I really want to hear this song on a girl...just pitch it up):
https://app.box.com/s/5p5cx1nptn4p98jmafaw

Lyrics:

What if, the world stops spinnin'?
What if, the clock stops tickin'?
What if, the moon lost its light?
What if, everything's gone?

Ref:
What if all that's left's just you and me?
What if all we felt's just agony?

Chorus:
What if everything's changed
when love has vanished into thin air
what if you and me's not you and me
anymore?
all these questions inside
keep echoing in my mind
what if everything has changed?
when love's not love like before.

What if, tomorrow's all despair
what if, violence's everywhere
What if, the moon lost its light?
What if, everything's gone?

Ref:
What if all that's left's just you and me?
What if all we felt's just agony?

Chorus:
What if everything's changed
when love has vanished into thin air
what if you and me's not you and me
anymore?
all these questions inside
keep echoing in my mind
what if everything has changed?
when love's not love like before.

What if it happens? (x4)

Chorus:
What if everything's changed
when love has vanished into thin air
what if you and me's not you and me
anymore?
all these questions inside
keep echoing in my mind
what if everything has changed?
when love's not love like before.
(x2)

love like before, love like before
love like before, love like before

Fantastic. Really loved this! Great song, great lyrics~ Write more!!! You're incredibly good at it. Your vocals were super awesome as well, loved the main vocal and all the backing stuff~

Love your voice on those runs! ^__^ Composing is never easy, and you have a talent for it, so keep it up!

QUOTE (Yu Xiang Kelvin @ May 16 2014, 08:46 PM)

Love your voice on those runs! ^__^ Composing is never easy, and you have a talent for it, so keep it up!

thanks

QUOTE (Nayami @ May 16 2014, 03:39 PM)

Fantastic. Really loved this! Great song, great lyrics~ Write more!!! You're incredibly good at it. Your vocals were super awesome as well, loved the main vocal and all the backing stuff~

thanks. I love writing, but sometimes, making the melodies of the songs i make is harder..that's why uptil now, i only got 5 songs with melodies, 2 with back tracks and three with just amateur recording of me playing the guitar..

You frickin' talented person, you.

Man I wish I had your skill - I suck at composing and when I write lyrics it's sparatically haha.

This was beautiful! Love the sort of new-agey feel to it, and the lyrics are gorgeous. You harmonies are so nice too~

Your vocals/performance are perfection, as always too!

I may try recording a version of this - I love everything about it so prettyyy XD

QUOTE (ValkyrieCeles @ May 19 2014, 01:18 PM)

Man I wish I had your skill - I suck at composing and when I write lyrics it's sparatically haha.  This was beautiful!  Love the sort of new-agey feel to it, and the lyrics are gorgeous.  You harmonies are so nice too~ Your vocals/performance  are perfection, as always too! I may try recording a version of this - I love everything about it so prettyyy XD

thanks so s much. I actually wrote a new one and just made the backtrack yesterday. I'll record it soon