Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

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Re: Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

Post by SharpCookies on Tue Feb 18, 2014 1:53 am

HELLO! Christening my first post on this forum with this song. I did a cover of Amy Winehouses "Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow". I hope you enjoy, and I would love some feedback. smile.gif

Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

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Re: Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

Post by Garnet on Tue Feb 18, 2014 2:21 am

I love your emotion and generally this was technically really nice! You've definitely been improving over the years and I think this song shows it! Great timing also!

Some peaking, which was a little distracting, but not overly so.

My only issue was your phrasing; it felt like you were trying to imitate Winehouse a little too much for my liking. I would have like a more... straight and pure type of pronunciation for this.

Good job!

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Re: Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

Post by KibatheKute on Tue Feb 18, 2014 2:24 am

I definitely told you how I felt about your beautiful cover!
You definitely utilized Amy's essence and still kept it original and unique, which I loved. Great job and I can't wait to hear more from you!
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Re: Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

Post by ValkyrieCeles on Tue Feb 18, 2014 2:31 am

I really loved the performance on this Cookies! I don't super have much to add that Garnet didn't already say: I think turning your mics input down a lot would help with the topping, and also help you with mixing volume levels: For me the backtrack to vocals ratio was a little too loud, I would have liked the vocals turned down a lot more. Also tightening up the runs like, just be sure to hit all the notes in them cuz you were sliding a little here and there and the runs didn't sound as clear as they could have been.

Overall I really liked this a lot! I've missed hearing you smile.gif
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Re: Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

Post by Nayami on Tue Feb 18, 2014 2:33 am

This was really nice, Cookies~! Your performance was really good, and your emotion was perfect. You have a really pretty voice and took good control over the song.

I do have to echo Garnet's feedback on the phrasing. It got a little distracting for me. There were times where it wasn't so apparent, and those were really nice! But I would have liked you to kind of do your own thaaaang on it a little bit more and not try to emulate Winehouse so much.

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Re: Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

Post by Cassie on Wed Feb 19, 2014 4:03 am

Imma skip the constructive stuff b/c everyone has said everything I want to say and just skip to the compliments! XD


This was really lovely! I love your tone on this and your emotion and performance are so wonderful!
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